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  1. Feb 16, 2007 10:38 PM #1
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    Poem 3

    Pity....pity is what you want
    Pity is what you got
    You selfish bastard
    Attention was what you craved
    How dare you try to say you know me?
    How dare you try to make it seem you understand?
    Just who the hell do you think you are?
    You're no one
    I don't need worthless people like you
    You make me want to puke
    You're nothing!
    My body shakes to end you
    I grin evilly knowing I hate you
    You make me think this way
    I wished I never knew you
    Here i put the blame on another
    When you been standing there
    That whole time
    My teeth aches to rip you apart
    The beast in me has released
    Your time will come
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  2. Feb 16, 2007 11:48 PM #2
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    Re: Poem 3

    Okay this is getting darker every poem... nice theme as well. Keep the poems comming ^_^
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  3. Feb 16, 2007 11:55 PM #3
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    Re: Poem 3

    full of hate and anger...dark... whoa...

    i won't be able 2 do that...
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  4. Feb 17, 2007 05:45 AM #4
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    Re: Poem 3

    "The beast in me has released"

    The wording seems a bit weird. Other than that? Good job.
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