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    Poem

    I stand frozen in time,
    Frozen in the happiness that was....
    Was it fake...
    or real?
    I don't know...............

    I stand frozen in the sadness...
    yearning to lead my life for a change.
    but this life has hurt me so bad,
    and i don't think i'll be the same.

    I stand frozen at the desk,
    at the library for which i sit.
    frozen glare at the screen...
    wishing you were there.

    I have now a frozen heart...
    and no warmth shall reign in me.
    this is what happens when love kills...
    a man just like me...............................


    Justin (w/ tear filled eyes)

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Poem

    This was good. But let me give you my feedback. I feel as though I could get a degree in heartbreak. Being frozen sucks... but thawing out is worse.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Poem

    this poem was cool but i have to agree
    because you heart breaks if you let it
    though some let it go numb and feel it with
    despite and regret thinking that it will make the
    pain less , which it dosnt but this poem is pretty good
    i like it .
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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