Creative~!! This is very good @.@ oh god... i love poems like this too bad im not that creative to make 1... *rofl*
Nicely done.. the rhymes and the way the poem goes is very good I like it very much I hope you will write more though.. the poem section could use some1 of your calibre..
last word... is.. Damn enjoyable.. keep up the good work...i hope... because you said you aint writing no more.. *sighs*