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    Poem

    Do you want to know the truth?
    About what I've felt thus far?
    About how I've been wanting,
    to talk to you for so long?
    That everynight I come here,
    to my friends to get online?
    Do you want to know why?

    i started to like you.
    I didn't know why at first,
    until I smiled the biggest smile,
    and shed that one single tear.
    The tear that broke open,
    the cold heart for good.

    But... I don't want to hurt you.
    Leave you out in the cold.
    I don't want to find someone here,
    and then leave you high and dry.
    You've been the best for me,
    and I can't thank you enough.
    You're what I care about now,
    since all else has bailed on me.
    I don't want to cry anymore,
    so much that i can't see.

    Can I care about you,
    like I've said I would for "her"?
    I don't know...
    and that's why I am confused.
    Do I....
    Or don't I....
    It's my problem now........
    I'm sorry.


    -WR-

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    Re: Poem

    I liked it. Full of true emotion that wasn't masked with the sugary coating of lies to protect the one you care for. I'm sure the girl will understand. You two must have a deeper friendship that cant be destryoed easily, so this confession would really touch her.
    Nice flow too.
    Last edited by princesslady; Dec 16, 2007 at 03:54 AM.

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