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    Poem 4

    I am no object
    You do not own me
    You have no say so over me
    I am free as the birds that fly
    I am like the wind you feel
    How dare you claim me?!
    I'm not some animal you find!
    I am human
    But a beast been released inside me
    I bare my fangs that craves to taste you
    I shouldnt be feeling this way
    But you did this to me!!
    Dont you dare try to read me!
    I hate you
    I hate you!!
    You f***ing piece of s***!!
    You make my insides turn!
    Oh don't think differently of me
    This always been apart of me
    You did nothing but ignore it!
    Don't make this all about you!
    I would care if you decided to walk
    Across a street and get hit by two buses
    Expect to hear me laugh and not cry
    Got that?
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    Re: Poem 4

    The ending.. Couldve been better. I dont like the way you worded it.
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