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    Poem about full metal alchemist

    They called me a prodigy
    Though to this day I don't know what they see
    Through my pride our future I have sown*
    And my hart feels like a stone

    I thought I'd found a way
    To bring her back some day
    To shake this cold infesting my bones*
    Yet I couldn't even create a clone*

    Our mother, she left us behind*
    My brother and I all *alone*
    Our faces turned to stone*
    Though within we grieved*
    And my anger seethed
    ** **
    This cold hard metal against my skin
    But it is for you my brother I hope to win
    Your body encased*
    Your features erased*
    My best friend my only kin
    Why did you have to pay for my sin

    Yet still you call me a prodigy*
    And In your eyes no hate do I see*
    So my resolve turns to stone*
    As you warm the cold in my bone*

    Slowly we heal
    Fighting to bring you skin to feel
    To reclaim what we lost*
    No matter what the cost


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    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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    Re: Poem about full metal alchemist

    That....was.....AWESOME!!!!! I LOVE YOU!!!! even though ive never met you a day in my life :P

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    Re: Poem about full metal alchemist

    i really love this poem.... not just beacuse its FMA but i could totaly belive thats what goes through his mind every day. good work. i love it!

    Love looks with not the eyes, but with the mind.
    (midsummer night dream)

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    Re: Poem about full metal alchemist

    Thanks! I'm glad you think that cuz that is exactly what I was going for, something that one could really see him thinking.
    Sword in hand, fire in heart, I walk towards my future just playing my part.
    The school of the undefeated East! The winds of the king! Zenshin! Keiretsu! Tempa! Kyoran! Look! The East is burning red!” (G Gundam)
    Ride Fast, Live Free & Stay strong.

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