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    A poem about time

    this is a poem i made myself for a certain person



    Poem About Time


    Showtime Prime time More time
    When i am with you i always have more time.
    Low time Nighttime Daytime
    When i think about you my thought s of
    You is always in the daytime.
    Ever Lasting time Lost time
    Even when i past away i will watch out
    for you all the time.

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    Re: A poem about time

    In some parts it does not make sense, through out the whole poem you show that you care for some one, that time can't take away. Although it seems like your trying to keep a promise that you might not be able to keep.

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    Re: A poem about time

    that is pretty i like it ......... i give it a 10 out of 10 .....
    *clap* clap*
    it cool....
    hi whats up

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