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    "poem Contest"

    Ok, rules are as follows!

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    TOPIC "Windmills"

    LINES> u can have at most 20 lines of text
    >>>> u can have at least 5 lines of text


    1 submission per person!

    Submit ur poem in this thread, DO NOT POST COMMENTS HERE! u can only post poems on this thread! Those caught posting comments will receive a 10% warning and post deletion"

    Those caught posting more than 1 poem will be banned from the contest.

    DUE JUNE 25th! get to work! "you may post ur work on a new thread for comments!"
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    I will talk to the owner about a nice prize for the winner! =)

    ALSO! i need some judges, if you think you have what its got then pm me. but that means u cant participate in the contest, just judge.
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    Re: "poem Contest"

    As i stand there in the bay
    on the hill not far away
    i see a Windmill on a hill
    that remind me of time of
    chill the winter months were
    harsh and crule and the bread
    we couldnt make for school.
    the wind was blowing but
    not enough to get the Windmill
    to make some crust while the
    the Windmills not working not
    at all the corn meal waisted
    far the fall. now i lay here and
    lay to waist it was a shame for
    i said my grace.
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: "poem Contest"

    Flashes of old memories come into play
    Some good and some bad I must say
    What was “hidden” from a child’s eyes
    Remember asking you about it and all I got was denies

    Never saw you in short sleeves
    For then all your lies would start to unweave
    I was smarter than what you thought
    In the eyes of a child, you were caught

    Visions of burnt bent spoons
    You were not the picture of a druggie goon
    Wasn’t my love for you enough to make you wanna quit
    Guess not, because you kept going for one last hit

    I still ask the reasons why
    As I look to where you are… in the sky
    I am your True Love and I love you still
    Some memories keep turning in my head like a windmill

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    Re: "poem Contest"

    The windmill always turns
    And Life carries on
    The air continues to blow
    Even as people die
    And forever fade away

    Human lives are nothing more
    Then dust blowing in the breeze
    Not everyone always cares
    As lives are taken away easily

    But we all feel the draft
    The hole that has been left behind
    They don’t want you to forget them
    But their memory usually doesn’t survive

    So many I don’t even know
    Flower petals taken by the wind
    But in my heart and soul
    I will try to always remember
    Those who no longer live
    Last edited by White_Mage88; Jun 20, 2006 at 02:47 PM.

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    Re: "poem Contest"

    Ghost bearing Wooden Wings

    A whisper from the earth’s sky falls over me
    Kissing the windows of my eyes
    A murmured plea to let you in
    Escaping through the ends of my finger tips

    Your love harbors me in
    I follow
    Escaping through wooden wings
    Shaping shadows over my face

    You keep me mesmerized
    Your energy pulls me in
    Haunting your impassive steps without a sound

    Like a child, you give me an innocence
    I call you in, and you repel me
    I’ll speak your name to expect no answer

    Bound to you willingly
    I call out to you , my windmill.
    My love.
    Last edited by Nympho; Jun 20, 2006 at 12:31 AM.

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    Re: "poem Contest" (this is a view from the windmill itself)

    I have seen countless storms,
    Countless more battles,
    My arms have spun endless,
    As the winds of change comes,
    But I stand alone in the changing landscape.

    I have seen people come and go,
    I have sheltered them from storms,
    I have witness the love shared between them,
    I have offered myself to those who need it,
    But I stand alone till the end of time.

    I have chipped and broken away,
    Piece by piece as others go on with their lives,
    If I could speak, I would have countless tales,
    People would stay and listen to me,
    But I stand alone watching the world change

    I have fallen into despair with no one to mend me,
    Then like a God-send gift, a kind stranger takes pity,
    He makes stronger and feel young again,
    And he stays to live with his family,
    But I stand now, watching this family grow and bossom.

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    Re: "poem Contest"

    Like a windmill standing in an empty void,
    I long for something new
    Imagince the haunting loneliness
    The emptiness inside

    Eerie silince forcing your soul to freeze
    Watching a meaningless scene before you
    As familiar shadows mock you
    And you yearn for an end

    But until the ending, the windmill still turns
    The ever-stretching landscape continues,
    And the solitude carries on.

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    Re: "poem Contest"

    "Old Mill"

    I stand alone like a kite being flown in a storm
    Ive been abandoned, alone
    The wind rises apace
    I creek like an old gate in a cemetary

    I tell myself I'm still useful
    I tell myself they'll come back
    I tell myself.....
    Stupid old man...........you're alone
    You're all alone.....

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