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    a poem....*could I get simpler?*

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    Re: a poem....*could I get simpler?*

    Oh WOW... This so sad but so beautiful. My friends honestly were what kept me alive at times. I cut (haven't since November and am very proud of that) and I've been called extremely suicidal too... Only thing is, when I care about someone, I always tell them. One of my very close friends died about two years ago. I loved him, but was never able to tell him that. I won't make that mistake again. wow... I love this poem so sad but so good. ^_^

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    Re: a poem....*could I get simpler?*

    ....meh...I cut,the pains so good.anyways yes LA that poem relates REALLY good,so you could figure out what I have done

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    Re: a poem....*could I get simpler?*

    Woooow.... I was glued to that... very good indeed... but you gotta come up with a better title! I almost didn't read it because of the title. Do you know how often people post "Poem" or "A poem" on here? You start to think if someone cant think hard enough to come up with a title than perhaps its not a good poem. In your case its quite the contrary. GREAT WORK
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    Re: a poem....*could I get simpler?*

    Oi!
    This poem has already been here before >_>
    Anyways really sad poem, and the postion there is really painful.

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    Re: a poem....*could I get simpler?*

    wow..nothing gets pass this forum!,lol Ill have plentiful more!

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    Re: a poem....*could I get simpler?*

    wow wow wow ....nice i love it ..good work ..
    (Sometimes you love something so much that it hurts to leave it, but you must. Sometimes it hurts too much to hold on to that thing you love. And sometimes you let go of what you love because it hurts, but then just sometimes... you get it back and live happily ever after.)

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    Re: a poem....*could I get simpler?*

    o.O I suppose you were to the point in school when you read Romeo & Juliet, The concept has been done to death. Either way, twas a good poem indeed, kept the reader sucked in and wanting more. I enjoyed it ^.^
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