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    Re: [poem] Distorted

    *claps* wow this is awesome... great great job... makes a lot of sense to me... i love poems with deep meaning... not just a drabble [which I do in my poetry all the time hehe] once again, great job *salutes*...

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    @ Sachiko : It makes alot of sense 2 u. .... if it does, please do explain. Coz I'm confused.
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    That sucked...jk jk...great job jab.

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    Re: [poem] Distorted

    Reese is the person closest to my meaning of the poem,

    Simple dreams <<< The beginning of life, beggins with peoples dreams.

    things of happiness <<<Each second line is of happiness, Describing all the good times in life' things of happiness' notice not people but things.

    memories of the sadness <<<Memories remind you of the thing that have happened, and especially those things that are sad.

    Memories <<<< The dreams are over now in life and are just memories a person can cherish forever.

    love and joy This describes how you've learned to love people and finally be happy with yourself.

    deaths sweet sad remorse <<< Death has set in they are no happiness only sad remorse of things you should have done in life.

    Deaths <<<< The dreams no longer matter your no longer alive and in death you have no memories, "even in the bible you it says you wont' remmebr those that passed away.

    bright future again a happy second line... but your dead aren't you?? then is they're truly happiness in death?

    unheavenly decline angels fall
    << THis is describing How your joy was revoked though in life you where happy and sad, it doesn't matter everything falls into nothingness, your dreams doesn't matter in the long run... just faded memories.

    A measure of faith, a drop of hope, never ending bliss... joy revoked.

    This last line Invokes the meanning of the poem, The middle of each passage of happiness>> A measure of faith the things of happiness the dreams you had in life >>> A drop of hope Dreams are becoming realities and you are finally happy, >>never ending bliss you are happy with everythign that has happened in your life and Enjoyed every minute of it>>> Jopy revoked you are dying now and theres nothing your emmeories can do for you... but does that matter?



    I hope you all enjoyed this poem, i think its best if you draw your own meaning from a poem instead of others. Even if this is my interpertation it doesn't mean that you aren't intitled to your own. After all they are your memories its best to live the to the fullest and be happy with your decisions in life ^_^,
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    Re: [poem] Distorted

    aww that was so good i nere cryed keep it up make me cry ^__^

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    Ah shoot. I was way off, LOL. ^_^

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    Re: [poem] Distorted

    Wow... great interpretation Jade. I would hav never thought of that... 0_0
    You should do this more often. ^_^

    PS. I really did enjoy readin ur interpretation too Reese.

    Both were very meaningful and reflected the interpretors perspective on life.... so its only natural, right?
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    Re: [poem] Distorted

    a very nice poem dude. short, but simple and very reflective. as for the riddle behind, no clue. >>
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