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    A Poem For Fallen Souls

    this poem is good i gess i hope u like it umm yeah.

    I walk on this earth full of death,
    i see wars for no reason,
    i see fallen angels walking
    in the dark, and i see demons
    in the light, i see people killing
    people with there hands, i see
    people that walk alone with no
    home to go to with no one to love,
    i see people leaving there friends alone
    in time of need, i see the streets full
    of blood that gets wash in the rain,
    i see the world falling apart with no
    heroes to save the world, i feel the
    cold winters and the hot days of hell.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
    by me ^_^.



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    *claps* that was really kool alchemist of hell. Keep it up.

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    umm thanks its alchemistofdeath lol. thanks il try to post some more and glad u like it.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
    by me ^_^.



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    The subject of this poem has been written over and over. I get the feel of boredom when I read it. A little something unique wouldve made the poem more yours.
    Seduced by Flesh


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    thanks your comments help alot. it helps writers. i apreciated.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
    by me ^_^.



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