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    Poem: The Fool.

    The fool is a person inside all of us
    But this particular fool
    Has a story to tell

    He set out on a journey
    Not thinking twice
    All he sought was adventure
    Did not ponder the consequences

    As the three moons rise
    and the two suns set
    This fool lunged into darkness
    Inside it was frightening
    It was hard to get out
    But eventually he made it
    By pure luck, nothing more
    For he was the guiding light
    guiding them all through darkness
    He just did not realise it

    Once more he was thrown
    into an epic battle of confusion
    There were those who tried to teach him
    Those who tried to give him patience
    But even though he had good intentions
    The fool was too headstrong.

    The wiser tried to show him
    What was to become of him
    The fool plunged into the unknown
    once again
    Tried to fight evil
    But all he fought was himself
    As he stared into the face of death
    He realised
    That it was he who was the danger,
    not the darker side

    Dissapointed and confused,
    The fool would not take no
    for an answer.
    He continued to believe he could fight evil
    Continued to think he had to.

    Trouble comes to those who don't listen
    And this time the fool had no help at all
    He was fending for himself
    alone
    afraid
    a light becoming dimmer each second.

    Looking upon evil
    was like looking in a mirror
    But confusion clouded his thoughts
    just like many before him
    That have tried
    and abruptly failed.

    Eventually, as the end neared
    and the trumpets sounded
    He realised
    This was not a wise choice.
    Now, at the end,
    he had made a huge mistake
    and could not turn back time.
    There was only one option left...
    Sacrifice.

    Look before you leap.
    Yay!
    >A wedding? I love weddings! Drinks all around!

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    Re: Poem: The Fool.

    Wow ... is this based on a war, or a real life? Nonetheless, this is one of the most unique poems I've ever read ^_^ Keep up the good work

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    Re: Poem: The Fool.

    Thankyou! I come up with this stuff everyday-It just spills out! Sometimes I base them on stories or real life. This one is based on a story I read somewhere...can't remember it though. I just made it up coz it might relate to some people who don't look or think things through. Glad u like it!
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    Re: Poem: The Fool.

    I'm sure everyone will like it The poem has a nice meaning

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    Re: Poem: The Fool.

    Thanks again. I didn't expect this much praise!
    Yay!
    >A wedding? I love weddings! Drinks all around!

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    Re: Poem: The Fool.

    It doesnt have much rime but its words are the truth of the present, its preety long to



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: Poem: The Fool.

    it's not meant to be a rhyming poem. Not all poems rhyme. This poem is a verse poem, one that doesn't rhyme. I usually find these ones are more descriptive so I prefer them.
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    Re: Poem: The Fool.

    This poem is awesome! ^-^
    I haven't read a good poem like that in forever!
    I hope to read more of your work.

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