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    Poem of Happiness! :D

    Jump... Like Your Life Depends On It

    My lungs are failing
    So hard to breathe
    The air is brutal
    Rushing at me

    The ground gets closer
    Further away the sky
    I've left you a note
    Scrawled with my goodbyes

    I've tried so hard to make it okay
    But I gave in to the pulling
    More and more every day

    Now speeding me down
    The ground growing near
    As I'm pulled
    Im falling away from my fears

    Seconds left
    And years of suffering
    I've tried to laugh
    And act like it's nothing

    I close my eyes
    It happens so fast
    Now bleeding and lifeless
    The pain's gone at last


    The poem may be awkward but dont hate D;
    Last edited by EmoSock; Oct 30, 2008 at 11:37 AM.

    Stand in the middle and you wont get dizzy
    Stand in the middle and you wont fall down

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    Re: Poem of Happiness! :D

    yea you are right the poem is awkward lol but i get what you were trying to say.
    it was interesting to read. your details were on point. message on point. just the flow of the poem could've been a little better.
    but good job anyway
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