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    A poem by hellknight and Lasura

    lol ^^ I won't dare to think up a title for this on my own so for now this will be a no title poem ^^ I'd call it "Second Chance" I guess.

    This is what we (hellknight and Lasura) made together. It might be a bit confusing.
    Well I did my best ^^
    Be sure to tell us what you think!!!!

    Enjoy!

    (HK)
    I always loved you
    Your the best thing happen in my life
    I am just so happy
    That you are my only wife

    (Lasura)
    When you are in my arms,
    The sun just seems to shine brighter.
    You pushed me forward when I was down
    With you I've become... more of a fighter

    (HK)
    I would never let you go
    I'll hold you so tight
    Just don't ever cry
    Everything will be alright

    (Lasura)
    Let me be the power
    That pulls you through this dark
    Don't ever be afraid
    I'll earease the pain- it's every single mark

    (HK)
    I promise to make everything right
    Just don't put me in this situation
    Because you know I still love you
    I don't want to go through this suffocation.

    (Lasura)
    Life without you would be too dark
    Too painfull for me to bear
    I know we can pull through this
    You won't be sorry, I swear

    (HK)
    When I hold you in my heart
    I feel like I'm going to cry
    I am telling you the truth
    And you know I never lie

    (Lasura)
    So don't tell me it is over
    Don't tell me it's too late
    To be with you...
    Or not to be at all is my fate.



    P.s. Maybe some edits will come later

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: A poem by hellknight and Lasura

    i loved it cuz it seem to be deep on both parts. if u dont mind me asking why did u guys decide to do a poem to gether?

    Tanks zyta

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    Re: A poem by hellknight and Lasura

    O.o eeee.... I don't know... He asked and I'm ready to try everything new And it was fun (appart from the part when I lost the script... ~.~)

    I'm glad you even loved it ^^ I find it a bit confusing maybe, because we do write a bit different it seems...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: A poem by hellknight and Lasura

    well who do u guys love?? unless its eachother. it was cool.

    Tanks zyta

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    Re: A poem by hellknight and Lasura

    Lasura~!!! how could u~!! *faints*


    yea... it is a bit confusing... hmm... but it was nice... ^^

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    Re: A poem by hellknight and Lasura

    it was so sweet, I have a bit of a toothache. And I agree it was a tad confusing, but nothing a little edit here and there wont solve. Overall though, I thought it was surely a worthwhile poem. Although... I personally such lovey dovey subject matter makes me.... well.... quite frankly a bit jealous. Its good to know that people are still falling in love somewhere. Good job to you both.
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