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Reply With Quotei loved it cuz it seem to be deep on both parts. if u dont mind me asking why did u guys decide to do a poem to gether?
lol ^^ I won't dare to think up a title for this on my own so for now this will be a no title poem ^^ I'd call it "Second Chance" I guess.
This is what we (hellknight and Lasura) made together. It might be a bit confusing.
Well I did my best ^^
Be sure to tell us what you think!!!!
Enjoy!
(HK)
I always loved you
Your the best thing happen in my life
I am just so happy
That you are my only wife
(Lasura)
When you are in my arms,
The sun just seems to shine brighter.
You pushed me forward when I was down
With you I've become... more of a fighter
(HK)
I would never let you go
I'll hold you so tight
Just don't ever cry
Everything will be alright
(Lasura)
Let me be the power
That pulls you through this dark
Don't ever be afraid
I'll earease the pain- it's every single mark
(HK)
I promise to make everything right
Just don't put me in this situation
Because you know I still love you
I don't want to go through this suffocation.
(Lasura)
Life without you would be too dark
Too painfull for me to bear
I know we can pull through this
You won't be sorry, I swear
(HK)
When I hold you in my heart
I feel like I'm going to cry
I am telling you the truth
And you know I never lie
(Lasura)
So don't tell me it is over
Don't tell me it's too late
To be with you...
Or not to be at all is my fate.
P.s. Maybe some edits will come later
i loved it cuz it seem to be deep on both parts. if u dont mind me asking why did u guys decide to do a poem to gether?
Tanks zyta
O.o eeee.... I don't know... He asked and I'm ready to try everything new
I'm glad you even loved it ^^ I find it a bit confusing maybe, because we do write a bit different it seems...
well who do u guys love?? unless its eachother. it was cool.
Tanks zyta
Lasura~!!! how could u~!! *faints*
yea... it is a bit confusing... hmm... but it was nice... ^^
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it was so sweet, I have a bit of a toothache. And I agree it was a tad confusing, but nothing a little edit here and there wont solve. Overall though, I thought it was surely a worthwhile poem. Although... I personally such lovey dovey subject matter makes me.... well.... quite frankly a bit jealous. Its good to know that people are still falling in love somewhere. Good job to you both.
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