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    Poem I made to get a girl to forgive me

    i got accused for saying the girl i am in love with is a whore so i made this for her

    Thru times of hatred
    And despair
    No one can help you
    No one really cares
    Whether u live
    Or u die
    And people
    Passing by
    Your frail crumpled body
    Not sparing a second glance
    As you lay there
    Feeble weak
    But then you wake up
    And it was only a dream
    But you still feel a sadness
    In your heart
    And you look a picture
    Of the one you love
    And you realize
    That what u saw
    Was not a bad dream
    But
    A
    Better
    Fate
    Than
    Her
    Hating
    You
    For
    Something
    You
    Didn’t
    Do
    Please forgive me
    I
    Didn’t
    Say It
    I would never
    I just wouldn’t
    I love you too much
    But there was no answer…
    It was only a picture
    Whom I had pleaded to.
    Please…
    Just…
    Forgive...
    Me…
    Please…
    Love only if you are willing to hate.

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    Re: Poem i made to get a girl to forgive me

    dude why would you do that man did she dump you or is she really a whore because if she is not your a asshol@ if she is your saying a fact

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    Re: Poem i made to get a girl to forgive me

    dude i just think your poem is weird no offense, but i dont understand it
    Im the one who walks and lives in the shadows.

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    Re: Poem i made to get a girl to forgive me

    It was a good poem and a nice appology. I hope she forgives you. I can't wait to read more.
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    Re: Poem i made to get a girl to forgive me

    Dude, WTF?

    Was that an apology or a friggin' death threat? I mean seriously. Not to start any beef or nothin', but DAMN! That was super-morbid.

    Who does that? One minute you're calling her a whore, the next you're talkin' about crumpled up dead bodies, then you're apologizing?

    I'm so confused... thumbs up anyway.

    You get an "E" for effort. f ^_^


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