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    Poem: "If I die"

    If I die before I awake
    I pray to the lord my soul to take
    But before I die let me live a life that is great

    Pain and suffering I understand
    Just let it all fall into place
    Triumph over tribulation, strong will...dedication

    Times are hard
    Want to throw in the towel...frustration
    Want to get away...great escape

    If I die before I awake
    Let my heart beat in others...vibrate
    A rhythm you can't get rid of
    A motion you can't shake

    A picture perfect memory
    In a imperfect frame that won't break
    Snap shots of life that form a collage of constellation

    If I die...
    I pray to the lord my soul he gave
    He give'th; he take'th away
    Well I hope so; in this case...

    I swear and my right hand I raise
    To tell the truth and nothing but the truth
    No fiction...that's fake

    I sin for my sensation
    I had my own communion that spoke for myself
    That's bad communication

    Lust comes see me quite often
    And I tend to not mind...consenual visitation
    Know heed of sexual hesitation

    This is my confession to the congregation
    Can't suppress; got to air it out...express
    Can't hold it back, then get it off my chest

    I mean I fill good, but I want to empty out my best
    Everything is all right, but there is nothing left
    Before I die let me live a life no one lived yet

    If I die before I awake
    I pray to the lord my soul to take
    But before I die
    Let me live a life that he won't foresake...

    If I die...

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: Poem: "If I die"

    That was epic! I like how you started off with your title and ended it with it as well, so it kinda all joins together...nice one!

    Death is as generation is, a composition of like elements, and a decompostion into the same.

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