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    Smile Poem by me.^_^Hope you like it.

    Why do I fail?
    I keep trying but still I fall.
    Short I come in life to tell.
    That I've learned from all.
    And say I dream,hope,wish,and fantasize.
    All thatcelebrities own in life.
    They have everything and I know why
    God gave them power over the way we die
    Poverty,depression, it makes me strong
    But how long must I go on
    Success is shy with me
    People lie to me.
    Your life means nothing to me.

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    Re: Poem by me.^_^Hope you like it.

    Its good. I like it! Really keep up the good work!
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    Re: Poem by me.^_^Hope you like it.

    moving to poems.
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    Re: Poem by me.^_^Hope you like it.

    It's got some potential. Keep on the same track next time.

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    Re: Poem by me.^_^Hope you like it.

    i liked this, especially the last part. " Success is shy with me. People lie to me." Great way to end. ^ ^ Keep up the good work.


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    Re: Poem by me.^_^Hope you like it.

    i like this poem wanting peple to be honest and not lie to you
    it gets you thinking of who your real freinds are
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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