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    poem needed today!!!!!

    Hey my good friends of ao, i know how you are all very talented so i need your help. Today is my boyfriends birthday and i want to put a poem inside the card i got him but im not very good at it so i was wondering if there is anyone out there that can help me. It needs to be a love poem but nothing to sappy-ish. Thanks your good friend tifa4cloud

    o wait i just realised maybe people dont want to post their poems publicly so if you wish then a pm would be nice lol
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    thank you equinn

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    Re: poem needed today!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by tifa4cloud View Post
    o wait i just realised maybe people dont want to post their poems publicly so if you wish then a pm would be nice lol
    Exactly how do you want it? ^^ Short? Long? Storyish?... Details ^^x..
    X.x.X The only thing I'll ever want... X.x.X

    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: poem needed today!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by tifa4cloud View Post
    Hey my good friends of ao, i know how you are all very talented so i need your help. Today is my boyfriends birthday and i want to put a poem inside the card i got him but im not very good at it so i was wondering if there is anyone out there that can help me. It needs to be a love poem but nothing to sappy-ish. Thanks your good friend tifa4cloud
    Write him something nice, it doesn't have to be a poem that rhymes and whatnot. I am pretty sure he will appreciate a poem written by you unlike a poem written by someone else. Just be yourself, put all those feeling you have for him in writing.

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    Re: poem needed today!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by ketaro View Post
    Write him something nice, it doesn't have to be a pome that rhymes and whatnot. I am pretty sure he will appreciate a poem written by you unlike a poem written by someone else.

    he does have a point. It's more special and unique coming from you and your heart.. not someone elses.
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    X.x.X Is for you to love me the way I love you.. X.x.X

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    Re: poem needed today!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by BrokenLover101 View Post

    he does have a point. It's more special and unique coming from you and your heart.. not someone elses.
    love poems are simple...
    not hard at all
    just
    be like


    roses are red
    and so id my heart
    your in my head
    from when the day starts

    i think about you
    24/7
    and when you kiss me
    i'm sent straight to heave

    happy birthday baby
    i hope there are many more
    just to let you know
    you'll always be the one i adore

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    Re: poem needed today!!!!!

    well thanks for your help friends but in the end i decided to write him something from the heart, it wasnt exactly a poem and nothing i could have wrote would describe how i feel because it goes deeper than words and thats what i realised, so i just wrote what i felt and it was great, he loved it and want to know why, because he loves me for me thank you all so much

    thank you equinn

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    Re: poem needed today!!!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by tifa4cloud View Post
    well thanks for your help friends but in the end i decided to write him something from the heart, it wasnt exactly a poem and nothing i could have wrote would describe how i feel because it goes deeper than words and thats what i realised, so i just wrote what i felt and it was great, he loved it and want to know why, because he loves me for me thank you all so much
    well seeing as my gf's b-day is nmext month it seems that i have just made her the perfect poem myself... now i have to buy a card and write it in there >.> but i gots no money xD but yea thats for the request cause i'd have never been able to write that

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