Thread: poem needed today!!!!!

Originally Posted by tifa4cloud

o wait i just realised maybe people dont want to post their poems publicly so if you wish then a pm would be nice lol

Exactly how do you want it? ^^ Short? Long? Storyish?... Details ^^x..

Originally Posted by tifa4cloud

Hey my good friends of ao, i know how you are all very talented so i need your help. Today is my boyfriends birthday and i want to put a poem inside the card i got him but im not very good at it so i was wondering if there is anyone out there that can help me. It needs to be a love poem but nothing to sappy-ish. Thanks your good friend tifa4cloud

Write him something nice, it doesn't have to be a poem that rhymes and whatnot. I am pretty sure he will appreciate a poem written by you unlike a poem written by someone else. Just be yourself, put all those feeling you have for him in writing.

Originally Posted by ketaro

Write him something nice, it doesn't have to be a pome that rhymes and whatnot. I am pretty sure he will appreciate a poem written by you unlike a poem written by someone else.

he does have a point. It's more special and unique coming from you and your heart.. not someone elses.

Originally Posted by BrokenLover101

he does have a point. It's more special and unique coming from you and your heart.. not someone elses.

love poems are simple...
not hard at all
just
be like


roses are red
and so id my heart
your in my head
from when the day starts

i think about you
24/7
and when you kiss me
i'm sent straight to heave

happy birthday baby
i hope there are many more
just to let you know
you'll always be the one i adore

well thanks for your help friends but in the end i decided to write him something from the heart, it wasnt exactly a poem and nothing i could have wrote would describe how i feel because it goes deeper than words and thats what i realised, so i just wrote what i felt and it was great, he loved it and want to know why, because he loves me for me thank you all so much

Originally Posted by tifa4cloud

well thanks for your help friends but in the end i decided to write him something from the heart, it wasnt exactly a poem and nothing i could have wrote would describe how i feel because it goes deeper than words and thats what i realised, so i just wrote what i felt and it was great, he loved it and want to know why, because he loves me for me thank you all so much

well seeing as my gf's b-day is nmext month it seems that i have just made her the perfect poem myself... now i have to buy a card and write it in there >.> but i gots no money xD but yea thats for the request cause i'd have never been able to write that