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    a poem that needs a title

    hi guys, i wrote this poem but i didn't know what to title it , i need your help a bit
    if you just name it and give me your opinions i will be very thankfull for you
    thank you for your time
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    " have you ever worried and no one was there,
    have you ever screamed and no one seemed to hear,
    have you ever cried and no one believed you
    have you ever seemed that you can't believe anything
    have you ever felt like me "
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    The screams , the tears and my cries
    They were my call for help

    I can't never seem to believe
    What is going on infront of me

    The truth sealed underneath the hearts
    And the justice forgotten underneath the souls

    I can't seem to remember when everything was so perfect
    My memories seemed to fade with each step i take

    There is nothing to see and nothing to hear
    Now that i can not see or hear
    I miss the joy of this life

    I miss my smile
    And i miss my happyness

    Now that i came to bear this
    No joy will be exchanged for my pain
    No reward will be achieved when my time is done

    I am robbed from everything i desire
    And i am left with everything i hate and despise

    No joy
    No happyness
    And no love

    Alone is who i am
    Alone is who i will be

    I still wish to find a friend that cares
    A friend that will never hurt me

    All my desires may have been robbed
    But i still have my will and hope

    I am not ready to fade
    Nor i am ready to die

    I still have a path to find
    A path that will change the course
    And the cause of my life

    I still have that path to take just to find
    a person that feels like me
    A person that understands me

    a person i can trust
    and a person i can love
    a person that will be my friend ,best friend and family forever
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    Re: a poem that needs a title

    well the poem sugest you would like a freind to trust and call family and to be a best freind for ever and the way you desribed you lonely ness and need for
    happiness love and peace . a good title for this would be somone on a road less travled . of course you migt night have meant it this way but thats what i get from this poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: a poem that needs a title

    "Someone in solitary path."

    I think that's suited it cause you had a lot of words that meaning you are alone right now.
    I love you,so please don't love me.

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    Re: a poem that needs a title

    ... i think it is better if you names your own poem, but if you ask ... let see.

    how about

    "the heart scroll"

    hehe.. i remember with "dead sea scroll" even i, my self, had not read it.

    okay, how about this

    "secreted core"

    ....?how?pardon me if you do not like them.

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    Re: a poem that needs a title

    Ha abu ''dearing memories'' ah no?



    perdoname michelle!

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    Re: a poem that needs a title

    wow those all sound so good but I cant think of A TITLE BUT GREAT JOB!!!


    thank u SasuraiHell
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