a poem to the old

alchemist_of_death · Sep 30, 2006, 01:58 PM

this poem is one of my best ones i think. its great one i wrote it a long time agao so eyah i hope u like it. ia hve som emore but il post them later well i ahv way too many i hope u like the ones that il post later .

I see in their eyes
the pass of time,
they have work
all their life,
I see them now
sitting down
to rest their last
day on earth,
I see my self in
their eyes which
will be mine
with the pass of
time.

*ketaro* · Oct 01, 2006, 09:27 AM

wow! that was pretty nice, feeling old my freind?

alchemist_of_death · Oct 01, 2006, 03:52 PM

well some times i really feel like i have lol. really. but yeah.

*princesslady* · Oct 01, 2006, 05:12 PM

wow. really nice and full of expression,. i dont feel old but old means more wisdom

alchemist_of_death · Oct 03, 2006, 03:26 PM

thats teh only thing about hgettin old if u ask me lol but then again we all follow the same path.

Sep 30, 2006, 01:58 PM	#1 (permalink)
alchemist_of_death Newbie Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in the streets looking for you ^_^. Posts: 67 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	a poem to the old this poem is one of my best ones i think. its great one i wrote it a long time agao so eyah i hope u like it. ia hve som emore but il post them later well i ahv way too many i hope u like the ones that il post later . I see in their eyes the pass of time, they have work all their life, I see them now sitting down to rest their last day on earth, I see my self in their eyes which will be mine with the pass of time. __________________ death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later. by me ^_^.
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ketaro Its Over 9000! Join Date: Apr 2005 Posts: 4,247 Thanks: 27 Thanked 34 Times in 32 Posts Credits: 24,435	wow! that was pretty nice, feeling old my freind?
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alchemist_of_death Newbie Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in the streets looking for you ^_^. Posts: 67 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	well some times i really feel like i have lol. really. but yeah. __________________ death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later. by me ^_^.
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princesslady Kyle's mom is a bytch Join Date: Jul 2006 Location: In solitude Posts: 1,450 Thanks: 6 Thanked 17 Times in 17 Posts Credits: 7,378	wow. really nice and full of expression,. i dont feel old but old means more wisdom __________________ *Born to rule, raised to lead, taught to establish: The African Queen*
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alchemist_of_death Newbie Join Date: Aug 2006 Location: in the streets looking for you ^_^. Posts: 67 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 230	thats teh only thing about hgettin old if u ask me lol but then again we all follow the same path. __________________ death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later. by me ^_^.
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