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    a poem to the old

    this poem is one of my best ones i think. its great one i wrote it a long time agao so eyah i hope u like it. ia hve som emore but il post them later well i ahv way too many i hope u like the ones that il post later .

    I see in their eyes
    the pass of time,
    they have work
    all their life,
    I see them now
    sitting down
    to rest their last
    day on earth,
    I see my self in
    their eyes which
    will be mine
    with the pass of
    time.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
    by me ^_^.



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    wow! that was pretty nice, feeling old my freind?

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    well some times i really feel like i have lol. really. but yeah.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
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    wow. really nice and full of expression,. i dont feel old but old means more wisdom

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    thats teh only thing about hgettin old if u ask me lol but then again we all follow the same path.
    death is not a final goodbey...but...a see you later.
    by me ^_^.



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