Thread: a poem to the old

this poem is one of my best ones i think. its great one i wrote it a long time agao so eyah i hope u like it. ia hve som emore but il post them later well i ahv way too many i hope u like the ones that il post later .

I see in their eyes
the pass of time,
they have work
all their life,
I see them now
sitting down
to rest their last
day on earth,
I see my self in
their eyes which
will be mine
with the pass of
time.