A poem for a poem... lol

If I did not speak... Would my words still reach you..?
If I never saw you... Would you still believe me, if I said
"all I see is beauty"... If I am nowhere near... Would you
still be able to feel me..? How do I taste??? Am I still sweet..?
If, love stinks... Am I smelly..?
Can you not handle the senses' of love.?? Are you
frightened of what comes with it.?? Which is trust...
For better or for worst... Are you scared of Cupids' curse?..

Can I be the one who breaks the spell you are under.??
Can I be your pillow of love & give you comfort.??
Can I come into your mind, so together we can wonder.??

Am I being too flirtatious.?. In which it has you being a little hesistant...
My ville is far from pleasant, but you can be my rainbow after a storm; if
you became a residence...

They say "home is where the heart is"... With you is where I live...
If I can change my world... You would be my sunshine in my universe...
You would be the star of my show & you wouldn't have to rehearse...
We would play off emotions & feelings... All because, you got my
love senses' tingling... LOL!!! :laugh:

A poem for a poem eh? Interesting title.
Anyway, the poem I found to be even more interesting. As it seemed to speak to me. Probably because I have no one who deos speak to me. That I look toward other peoples voices in the universe. Messages not meant for me... Answeres to questions I'd usually have to ask to the wind

I really liked this poem I mean a lot of it is exactaly how i felt a while ago I have to ask can i post this on my mtspace? you name as credit of course

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Originally Posted by Peach_follows

A poem for a poem eh? Interesting title.
Anyway, the poem I found to be even more interesting. As it seemed to speak to me. Probably because I have no one who deos speak to me. That I look toward other peoples voices in the universe. Messages not meant for me... Answeres to questions I'd usually have to ask to the wind

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So you caught on to my hidden message eh.?? LOL I had read your poem & felt like "what if this was directed towards me", so I just start writing.... I know the poem you wrote wasn't for me, but it is good to pretend & have that inspiration... LOL You know you always inspire me!!!

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Originally Posted by CBtay01

I really liked this poem I mean a lot of it is exactaly how i felt a while ago I have to ask can i post this on my mtspace? you name as credit of course

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I am so honored to even have someone read & comment on my writing; let alone wanting to post it on myspace.... Well you have my permission & blessing, if you do decide to post it.... I am also glad that you felt my writing... Then again I understand, if this is how you felt... LOL

Thank you both!!! Peach & CB....