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    A poem for a poem... lol

    If I did not speak... Would my words still reach you..?
    If I never saw you... Would you still believe me, if I said
    "all I see is beauty"... If I am nowhere near... Would you
    still be able to feel me..? How do I taste??? Am I still sweet..?
    If, love stinks... Am I smelly..?

    Can you not handle the senses' of love.?? Are you
    frightened of what comes with it.?? Which is trust...
    For better or for worst... Are you scared of Cupids' curse?..

    Can I be the one who breaks the spell you are under.??
    Can I be your pillow of love & give you comfort.??
    Can I come into your mind, so together we can wonder.??

    Am I being too flirtatious.?. In which it has you being a little hesistant...
    My ville is far from pleasant, but you can be my rainbow after a storm; if
    you became a residence...

    They say "home is where the heart is"... With you is where I live...
    If I can change my world... You would be my sunshine in my universe...
    You would be the star of my show & you wouldn't have to rehearse...
    We would play off emotions & feelings... All because, you got my
    love senses' tingling... LOL!!!

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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    Re: A poem for a poem... lol

    A poem for a poem eh? Interesting title.
    Anyway, the poem I found to be even more interesting. As it seemed to speak to me. Probably because I have no one who deos speak to me. That I look toward other peoples voices in the universe. Messages not meant for me... Answeres to questions I'd usually have to ask to the wind
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: A poem for a poem... lol

    I really liked this poem I mean a lot of it is exactaly how i felt a while ago I have to ask can i post this on my mtspace? you name as credit of course

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    Re: A poem for a poem... lol

    Quote Originally Posted by Peach_follows View Post
    A poem for a poem eh? Interesting title.
    Anyway, the poem I found to be even more interesting. As it seemed to speak to me. Probably because I have no one who deos speak to me. That I look toward other peoples voices in the universe. Messages not meant for me... Answeres to questions I'd usually have to ask to the wind
    So you caught on to my hidden message eh.?? LOL I had read your poem & felt like "what if this was directed towards me", so I just start writing.... I know the poem you wrote wasn't for me, but it is good to pretend & have that inspiration... LOL You know you always inspire me!!!

    Quote Originally Posted by CBtay01 View Post
    I really liked this poem I mean a lot of it is exactaly how i felt a while ago I have to ask can i post this on my mtspace? you name as credit of course
    I am so honored to even have someone read & comment on my writing; let alone wanting to post it on myspace.... Well you have my permission & blessing, if you do decide to post it.... I am also glad that you felt my writing... Then again I understand, if this is how you felt... LOL

    Thank you both!!! Peach & CB....

    The heart can't lie... Truth is... I love you!!!

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