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Aug 12, 2007, 07:19 AM
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 Credits: 16,042 | poem for rave I can’t believe people think my poems have meaning... They never have or will I’m sorry if it made you think so... I don’t want to live with a life of weighting mean things even when i know there not true... rave I’m truthfully sorry 10000 miles is pretty fair That’s the best reason to know we went together really I loved you... But that’s to fair away It would be a madrigal to have been together But... We all make choices Most for the best... I don’t blame you I blame the time and distance between us... And this I believe is the only one with a real meaning
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Aug 12, 2007, 07:55 AM
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Credits: 3,394 | Re: poem for rave can we say ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Watch for the back lash. I don't know what happend but just reading this you were pissed off. Good poem by the way. |
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Aug 12, 2007, 07:58 AM
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| Ao's official cat girl~★ Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Emerald island (Eire) (Ireland)
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Credits: 16,042 | Re: poem for rave no i dont care for the back lash if this ... and yes at that time i was quite pissed ....but still we were firends that was fine with me .......even tho it was like rub in my face ... but still... yeah was quite pissed thanks for the comment
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Aug 12, 2007, 08:20 AM
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| Femmebot's feel nothing.  Join Date: Apr 2005 Location: Friendly Fridley
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Credits: 2,204 | Re: poem for rave This poem made me uncomfortable. It felt like too much information. Not enough emotion. Aside from it being a tad confusing. I didn't get a sense of anger or being "pissed" at all. I wish you would have spent more time expressing the emotions behind your situation... rather than the specifics of whats going on. |
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