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Reply With Quotecan we say ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Watch for the back lash. I don't know what happend but just reading this you were pissed off. Good poem by the way.
I can’t believe people think my poems have meaning...
They never have or will
I’m sorry if it made you think so...
I don’t want to live with a life of weighting mean things even when i know
there not true...
rave I’m truthfully sorry
10000 miles is pretty fair
That’s the best reason to know we went together really
I loved you...
But that’s to fair away
It would be a madrigal to have been together
But...
We all make choices
Most for the best...
I don’t blame you
I blame the time and distance between us...
And this I believe is the only one with a real meaning
can we say ouch!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! Watch for the back lash. I don't know what happend but just reading this you were pissed off. Good poem by the way.
no i dont care for the back lash if this ... and yes at that time i was quite pissed ....but still we were firends that was fine with me .......even tho it was like rub in my face ... but still... yeah was quite pissed thanks for the comment
This poem made me uncomfortable. It felt like too much information. Not enough emotion. Aside from it being a tad confusing. I didn't get a sense of anger or being "pissed" at all. I wish you would have spent more time expressing the emotions behind your situation... rather than the specifics of whats going on.
... Not Ever Again...
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