I am not the glimmer of hope one would believe me to be.
My hopes lie in starlight and moonbeams.. things of which are hard to achieve.
To tell the truth I am quite vexed that one such as you slipped into my head.
I find myself of all things lost.
And Above all else.
Completely.
In.
Love.
Last edited by Averian; Aug 09, 2008 at 01:59 AM. Reason: thought it looked better
I really like this poem lots of feeling nice play on the words; but i also have the same problem i dont space it out properly and you have some punctuation problems.I liked it you should maybe try to make it a little longer, hope to hear a new piece soon.
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