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    ~*A poem to those who Need it*~

    I am not the glimmer of hope one would believe me to be.
    My hopes lie in starlight and moonbeams.. things of which are hard to achieve.
    To tell the truth I am quite vexed that one such as you slipped into my head.
    I find myself of all things lost.
    And Above all else.
    Completely.
    In.
    Love.
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    Re: ~*A poem to those who Need it*~

    I really like this poem lots of feeling nice play on the words; but i also have the same problem i dont space it out properly and you have some punctuation problems.I liked it you should maybe try to make it a little longer, hope to hear a new piece soon.

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