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    !#poem Winner#!

    Shade/K’ Heart
    The old windwill...
    How I love to watch it twirl in the wind.
    But it is this time I know
    The spirits are at play again.

    They make is spin fast,
    And make it spin slow....
    The old windmill whirling,
    And it's obvious to know.

    I pray the spirits be gentle,
    For the windwill's posts are weak.
    I just hope they don't hurt it,
    For my hope would then turn bleak.

    The windmill had been my guardian,
    for all my dreams and wishes.
    I've gone to it many times for comfort,
    and even blown the structure kisses.

    So spirits play nice,
    As you enjoy your playful time.
    So long till next time my friend,
    the old windwill of mine.


    Please discuss, also i will aweard him 10,000 points when we open the points system back up.
    -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate-
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    Re: !#poem Winner#!

    yay shade/k'heart , great job.

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    Re: !#poem Winner#!

    Really good, no title (very important aspect IMO) but it had a nice flow and setup. I thought this was the best work of all the entries and am glad it won. Windmill theme was evident and it really spoke to me as the reader. Overall it utilized a windmill in a abstract way to get the reader to think about the elements in a mystical way. Awesome job and Hammer gives it up!


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    Re: !#poem Winner#!

    wow...only the judges posts here xD
    It was nice ^_^ me like
    um...pointing out one point though
    WindMILL not WindWILL XD i know u didnt mean it though
    10,000 points T_T i want it !! congrats

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    Re: !#poem Winner#!

    wut?!?!?!?...how comes i didnt win???? btw all the peoms were great XD

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: !#poem Winner#!

    wao I like it alot...it has a deep sence but it is also verry simple so the meaning is in it and rite in front of you...at least that is how it seems...LOVE IT WRITE MORE PLZZZZZ!!!!!!!!
    Moving on Is the hardest Part

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    Re: !#poem Winner#!

    Nice poem ya got there. I stink at writing poems so I guess I can't appreciate it as much as every one else, but good none the less.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: !#poem Winner#!

    Quote Originally Posted by Blade X
    wut?!?!?!?...how comes i didnt win???? btw all the peoms were great XD
    You didn't win coz we prefered his work to yours XD
    Kidding....they were all great poems ^_^ But dun give up, there may be another contest....in the future..

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