!#poem Winner#!

*jaderabbit* · Jul 11, 2006, 09:08 PM

Shade/K’ Heart
The old windwill...
How I love to watch it twirl in the wind.
But it is this time I know
The spirits are at play again.

They make is spin fast,
And make it spin slow....
The old windmill whirling,
And it's obvious to know.

I pray the spirits be gentle,
For the windwill's posts are weak.
I just hope they don't hurt it,
For my hope would then turn bleak.

The windmill had been my guardian,
for all my dreams and wishes.
I've gone to it many times for comfort,
and even blown the structure kisses.

So spirits play nice,
As you enjoy your playful time.
So long till next time my friend,
the old windwill of mine.

Please discuss, also i will aweard him 10,000 points when we open the points system back up.

*Sashacat* · Jul 11, 2006, 09:28 PM

yay shade/k'heart

, great job.

Chiefblackhammer · Jul 11, 2006, 09:41 PM

Really good, no title (very important aspect IMO) but it had a nice flow and setup. I thought this was the best work of all the entries and am glad it won. Windmill theme was evident and it really spoke to me as the reader. Overall it utilized a windmill in a abstract way to get the reader to think about the elements in a mystical way. Awesome job and Hammer gives it

up!

elie26 · Jul 12, 2006, 12:10 AM

wow...only the judges posts here xD
It was nice ^_^ me like

um...pointing out one point though

WindMILL not WindWILL XD i know u didnt mean it though
10,000 points T_T i want it !! congrats

*Blade X* · Jul 12, 2006, 09:19 AM

wut?!?!?!?...how comes i didnt win???? btw all the peoms were great XD

Moon Doggy · Jul 12, 2006, 09:26 AM

wao I like it alot...it has a deep sence but it is also verry simple so the meaning is in it and rite in front of you...at least that is how it seems...LOVE IT WRITE MORE PLZZZZZ!!!!!!!!

shadowrulz · Jul 12, 2006, 09:31 AM

Nice poem ya got there. I stink at writing poems so I guess I can't appreciate it as much as every one else, but good none the less.

elie26 · Jul 13, 2006, 12:27 AM

Quote:

Originally Posted by Blade X

wut?!?!?!?...how comes i didnt win???? btw all the peoms were great XD

You didn't win coz we prefered his work to yours XD
Kidding....they were all great poems ^_^ But dun give up, there may be another contest....in the future..

Star Girl · Jul 13, 2006, 12:33 AM

was there sum sort of poetry contest? XD wow. well he definetly deserves it, but im sure everyone who was involved had good poems too ^_^
Congrats to the winner ^-^

Heartless_mage · Jul 13, 2006, 12:34 AM

usually i am not into poems like that but very good

SousukeSagara · Jul 13, 2006, 03:41 AM

I guess the winner deserves it... No comment with that...
It's very good...

Jul 11, 2006, 09:08 PM	#1 (permalink)
jaderabbit Cheetos Overlord Join Date: Dec 2004 Location: The World Posts: 3,650 Thanks: 0 Thanked 3 Times in 2 Posts Credits: 7,251	!#poem Winner#! Shade/K’ Heart The old windwill... How I love to watch it twirl in the wind. But it is this time I know The spirits are at play again. They make is spin fast, And make it spin slow.... The old windmill whirling, And it's obvious to know. I pray the spirits be gentle, For the windwill's posts are weak. I just hope they don't hurt it, For my hope would then turn bleak. The windmill had been my guardian, for all my dreams and wishes. I've gone to it many times for comfort, and even blown the structure kisses. So spirits play nice, As you enjoy your playful time. So long till next time my friend, the old windwill of mine. Please discuss, also i will aweard him 10,000 points when we open the points system back up. __________________ -Just another green eyed angel, distorted by mans love for hate- \|THE INFAMOUS\|The Host\|Twilight Series\|Twilight Movie\|Untouched!\|
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Sashacat The Sassy Cat Join Date: Oct 2004 Location: Illinois Posts: 187 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 401	Re: !#poem Winner#! yay shade/k'heart , great job.
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Chiefblackhammer Commander Ham Join Date: Nov 2004 Location: Winston Salem, NC Posts: 1,696 Thanks: 4 Thanked 32 Times in 29 Posts Credits: 26,228	Re: !#poem Winner#! Really good, no title (very important aspect IMO) but it had a nice flow and setup. I thought this was the best work of all the entries and am glad it won. Windmill theme was evident and it really spoke to me as the reader. Overall it utilized a windmill in a abstract way to get the reader to think about the elements in a mystical way. Awesome job and Hammer gives it up! __________________ *BUY MY ANIME COLLECTION* \|Hammer's Blog\|\|~AnimeVector~\|\|Hammer's Poetry\|
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elie26 Elie Jelly Join Date: Feb 2006 Location: Hell is an understatement Posts: 608 Thanks: 0 Thanked 1 Time in 1 Post Credits: 2,051	Re: !#poem Winner#! wow...only the judges posts here xD It was nice ^_^ me like um...pointing out one point though WindMILL not WindWILL XD i know u didnt mean it though 10,000 points T_T i want it !! congrats __________________
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Moon Doggy Newbie Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: I Live In the Last Place You Would Expect Posts: 21 Thanks: 0 Thanked 0 Times in 0 Posts Credits: 210	Re: !#poem Winner#! wao I like it alot...it has a deep sence but it is also verry simple so the meaning is in it and rite in front of you...at least that is how it seems...LOVE IT WRITE MORE PLZZZZZ!!!!!!!! __________________ Moving on Is the hardest Part
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