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    a poem written by girl with cancer

    i got this poem which was written by a girl with cancer in newyork hospital
    please read it,
    the e-mail said
    ''PLEASE pass this mail on to everyone you know - even to those you don't
    know! It is the request of a special girl who will soon leave this world
    due to cancer.

    This young girl has 6 months left to live, and as her dying wish, she
    wanted to send a letter telling everyone to live their life to the
     fullest,
     since she never will.
    She'll never make it to prom, graduate from high school, or get married
     and  have a family of her own.
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    please send this to everyone you know
    --------
    SLOW DANCE



    have you ever watched kids

    On a merry-go-round?

    Or listened to the rain

    Slapping on the ground?

    Ever followed a butterfly's erratic flight?

    Or gazed at the sun into the fading night?

    You better slow down.

    Don't dance so fast.

    Time is short.

    The music won't last.

    Do you run through each day

    On the fly?

    When you ask How are you?

    Do you hear the reply?

    When the day is done

    Do you lie in your bed

    With the next hundred chores

    Running through your head?

    You'd better slow down

    Don't dance so fast.

    Time is short.

    The music won't last.

    Ever told your child,

    We'll do it tomorrow?

    And in your haste,

    Not see his sorrow?

    Ever lost touch,

    Let a good friendship die

    Cause you never had time

    To call and say,"Hi"

    You'd better slow down.

    Don't dance so fast.

    Time is short.

    The music won't last.

    When you run so fast to get somewhere

    You miss half the fun of getting there.

    When you worry and hurry through your day,

    It is like an unopened gift....

    Thrown away.

    Life is not a race.

    Do take it slower

    Hear the music

    Before the song is over.


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    send this to everyone you know
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    Re: a poem written by girl with cancer

    That was very good. Its really sad and carries a message. I think its really good.


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    Re: a poem written by girl with cancer

    very awesome poem and it is important to
    take life slow so you want miss the good things
    like fridns,the rain that pours like a water fall's
    somtime's. awesome poem thought next time
    try posting you did this wasa good poem but not your's
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: a poem written by girl with cancer

    it makes me sad and i'm going to send it to my friends it is very touching and it kinda shows the meaning of life in a way.
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    I will fight until i find what i'm looking for...you can not judge me on my apperence I am a Warrior. If you have a problem with me..... then my blades will meet your neck.

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    Re: a poem written by girl with cancer

    wwwwooooowwww.....slowing down n appericating wut u got now.....such a sad poem

    Thanks for the siggy Ky-lyrra

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    Re: a poem written by girl with cancer

    Sad is all i got to said.
    Perfection is dull

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    Re: a poem written by girl with cancer

    I think this poem reminds us how important our lives are...all these feelings we have and feel. It is truly an honor to live and experience life to the fullest. Yet this girls dreams and hopes for the future was flushed down by cancer...This poem is brilliant yet sad...God bless her...
    If you strive for one thing in life for so long...It's a given you'll miss others along the way...that's how it is...That's life

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    Re: a poem written by girl with cancer

    The world sucks ass, doesn't it?
    NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
    Move Along.

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