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    Hi I'm Sakura Hime or Sakura Princess.....greetings from the royal palace. Here I will write my poems I made I hope you'll enjoy....you're honnored to write yours your self. Please do so if you wish.

    A special world....

    A special world for you and me,
    A special bond one can not see.
    It wraps us like a warm cocoon,
    And hold us ferciley in it's womb.

    It touches us like silver and gold
    And helps us get unfold.
    like silken thread it holds us fast
    And bonds like these were ment to last

    This special world is ours to share
    lets all make it fare and square
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    Re: Poems

    Oi! Good poem. I had to highlight the text to see it though.

    +=My Space=+ Thanks zeroenix for the sig and avi... wait that's me. +=zeroenix.net=+

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    Sorry I'll fix that...thank you for telling me.
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    So much time had passed
    Until yesterday I saw you
    I just knew my love had vanished
    Now I know it remains true.

    As you slowly glazed into my eyes
    From your lips spoke my name
    I could see it within your eyes
    Tears now flowing like rain.

    Finally you realize what you had
    And you let it slip away
    I can feel your heart breaking
    Now you know it was a mistake.

    You had a woman that loved you
    Cherished you without a doubt
    I would have given up everything
    To prove what true love was about.
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    Re: Poems

    Great poem, really liked it. Keep it up if you're writing more.

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    wah.. those are so good! you are quite talented to write poems like that. i tried, but it didnt seem to work. see for yourself...

    Do you remember when we were young?

    Do you Remember when we original met?
    Do you Remember when you first looked at me?
    Do you Remember when you first smiled at me?
    Do you Remember when you first laughed at me?

    Do you Remember when we were friends?
    Do you Remember when you talked to me?
    Do you Remember when you cared for me?
    Do you Remember when you stayed by me?

    Do you Remember when we found each other?
    Do you Remember when you always cherished me?
    Do you Remember when you always held my hand?
    Do you Remember when you always says. . . I love you?

    Do you Remember when we were the past?
    Do you Remember when you won’t look at me?
    Do you Remember when you refuse to smile at me?
    Do you Remember when you never laughed at me?

    Do you Remember when we were not friends?
    Do you Remember when you haven’t been to talking me?
    Do you Remember when you do not care for me?
    Do you Remember when you didn’t stay but left me?

    Do you Remember when we lost each other?
    Do you Remember when you despise me?
    Do you Remember when you left my hand?
    Do you Remember when you . . . lied to me?

    Do you Remember what you have done to me?
    Do you Remember what you have said to me?
    Do you Remember what you never promised me?
    Do you Remember what you never been true to me?

    Do you Remember that I am not angry at you?
    Do you Remember that I will forgive you?
    Do you Remember that I am not cruel about it?
    Do you Remember?
    Will you Remember that I will always love you?

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    Re: Poems

    Great poem!!! a product of the heart and the mind.

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    Re: Poems

    Thank you everyone....I'm so pleased you're all giving me these coments...very pleased indeed. And 86panda no need to tell me your horrible for I do not think so myself. It's not so bad you just need to keep it up and keep on practicing... here I made these for you guys.

    Thank you for having faith in me....

    Thank you for having faith in me,
    However hard it was.
    An illness is compounded by
    No one coming near.
    Kindness can take courage when
    You see what mania does.
    Opening your arms to me
    Unravels my own fear.

    Thank you for having faith in me,
    I truly adore,
    However I say this there is nothing more.
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