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Originally Posted by Soldat of life 
ok... I know this should be considered a dead thread... but oh well... I have made some revisions on a few poems... and written a few more... here they are...
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“Rewrite” (Edited)
By
Jounin_Uzumaki
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What once flowed like a river now is an ocean in a storm
a place where time and space flow past like a swarm
This force is everywhere, changing and fitting my needs
To satisfy my ends, to end my suffering
Reverse the flow of misfortune,
Restore what is rightfully mine!
My deaf executioner torments me with his ignorance
It is a necessity that I kill my executioner so that he hears my pleads
But when I killed he who was destined to send me to my end
I realized that it wasn't he who was my killer, it was I!
I sentenced myself to death, but now I have another chance
Fix my errors, correct my path, set into virtuosity
Reclaim what I have lost, renew my faith,
to take it all back, and treat it as just a glance
of what could have happened, if I had not chose to rewrite my past...
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“You Are Gone Now”
By
Jounin_Uzumaki
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You are gone now,
You are gone now.
Why did your essence have to fade?
Your absence has turned me into a shade.
My struggles, all for naught,
You, are all I have sought.
From bliss to the pits of despair,
All for nothing, you are not there.
My life is all a blur,
I am nothing without her.
The time we shared was a blast
All of it ended, oh so fast.
Nothing of yours was left to see,
Nothing was left of you for me.
Time passes, I heave a sigh
As I look up to see clouds peppering the sky.
From bliss to the pits of despair,
All for nothing, you are not there.
My life is all a blur,
I am nothing without her.
Ashes scattered through the wind,
I will never forget the days we shared.
Because you are gone now,
You are gone now.
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(Note: This next poem is grotesque and not for the faint of heart! It has the purpose of showing the point of view of a person sent over the edge. You have been warned!)
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“Train of Consequences”
By
Jounin_Uzumaki
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“I detest your innocent smile,
Smug as a bug in a rug.
Those beady blue eyes of yours,
Claiming a false sense of purity.
Your nose is as crooked as your soul,
Your hair, ebon like your sins,
Sins which shall never be forgiven.
“That night three years ago,
I hope you enjoyed your time,
For you ruined my being back then.
Intoxicated vision, you climbed into your car,
Your train of consequences pulled out of the station then,
It made a wreck out of my life.
“You caused her death, although none could see it.
Internal bleeding, she must have suffered so.
I should make you suffer the same as she did,
I will claim her vengeance, sevenfold at that!
“Maybe I’ll cut your gut open,
Watch as your crimson life force spews out
And remove your organs as your precious fluids spill.
Maybe I’ll dissect you while you still breathe,
I’ll chop your body apart at the joints.
Or better yet, I’ll combine the two,
And do this all with a bloodthirsty grin on my face.
This wreck, it is your train of consequences.”
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