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    Locked Up
    Locked up from what I need
    Locked away from any deed
    Why is life so sarcastic
    Why is death so drastic
    Locked up from what I need
    Locked away from any deed
    Everything that results in happiness
    Always turns to sadness
    Locked up from what I need
    Locked away from any deed
    By: Linda W. (Hana)

    This poem seems to be very ironic to my life at this point in time.

    Goodbye
    Do you not like me anymore
    Am I really that hard to adore
    I wasn't born yesterday
    are you going to warn me oneday
    when you decide to go away
    how will emotions be kept abay
    I see something you don't
    you want to say something but won't
    you keep it locked up away
    everyone knows what you should say
    I think we should go our seperate ways
    And forget the last few days
    I guess this is goodbye
    So goodbye my once dear beloved
    By:Linda W. (Hana)

    I know this might suck.

    What I need to say
    I know I said I wouldn't cry
    But I can't seem to keep my face dry
    I seem to be really depressed
    You don't seem to be impressed
    I've become very depressed and sad
    And nobody knows what to tell my dad
    So here I am still crying
    My face still not drying
    And your standing there mad
    And so what are you going to tell my dad?
    By:Linda W. (Hana)

    So I know that this is probably horrible.


    Life and Death
    (H)Life is early,
    but very dull.
    Deatn is late,
    but very morbid.

    (T)Morbid it may be,
    but needed it is much.
    For without death,
    there can be no life.

    (H)But with life there is
    very little happiness.
    And in death there
    my be happiness.

    (T)But in death,
    awaits the unknown.
    There may be,
    no happiness there.

    (H)Fine, no happiness
    in life nor death,
    But only,
    Unknown mystery.

    (T)But in that unknown mystery,
    there is an adventure.
    And in adventure,
    happiness awaits.

    (H)Maybe adventure awaits
    for the daring
    But nothing awaits,
    the dull and boring.

    (T)But alas!
    Two things in life
    are sure, only two
    Death and taxes.

    (H)True, true death and taxes
    await the dull
    Money and death
    await the daring.

    By. Linda W.(Hana) and Chelsea C.(Tobi)

    this poem was written by me and a friend during class for a poetry slam contest.
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    thats a good poem. my name is angel asl please .

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    Re: Poems.....Read if you want

    Quote Originally Posted by angelbaby View Post
    thats a good poem. my name is angel asl please .
    Which one is good? I'm going to put others in this topic in a while.

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    Re: Poems.....Read if you want

    Quote Originally Posted by YaoiLover View Post
    Which one is good? I'm going to put others in this topic in a while.
    they are both good. angel::

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    Re: Poems.....Read if you want

    So the background of my poems.
    Locked up: I wrote this poem when I had to choose between color guard and a job that I had. I loved the job and I liked color guard but my boss and color guard instructor was making me choose and so I wrote this poem because I was sad and it turned out to be to Ironic.

    Goodbye: was written when I didn't know what my ex was thinking about, because he would start a conversation he would say forget about it.

    What I need to Say: was written when I couldn't take my ex ignoring me and I was really depressed.

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    Re: Poems.....Read if you want

    Quote Originally Posted by YaoiLover View Post
    Locked Up
    Locked up from what I need
    Locked away from any deed
    Why is life so sarcastic
    Why is death so drastic
    Locked up from what I need
    Locked away from any deed
    Everything that results in happiness
    Always turns to sadness
    Locked up from what I need
    Locked away from any deed
    By: Linda W. (Hana)

    This poem seems to be very ironic to my life at this point in time.
    I didn't like it first it has some reused verses and it's not so long sorry

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    Re: Poems.....Read if you want

    i like them... and im happy that u shared them with us.... and im srry about ur bf and everything.... but it'll work out in the end... we just need to wait... and it may not always turn out good, but something good will turn out in the end of it all...
    ****<darkangel>**** the darkness will always come... just never like u exspect....

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    Re: Poems.....Read if you want

    My ex boy friend are friends now, we talk to one another when we see each other but I believe we are happier just being friends.

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