Poetry corner; Shadow's style
I hear the whistling in the air
Of the bomb that is floating there
Millions of lives will be lost today
Turn of events wouldn't you say?
The bomb I see is exploding now
All I can think to do now is *POW!!!*
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If anyone's wondering, that's me hitting someone I would never think to hit at any other time.
Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style
It was short, but still a good poem, keep it up.
Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style
seeing your on death is origanle i like that
and it was short also just like a bomb short and sweet
i liek how you showed that
Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style
Ker-BOOOOOOOM!!!that and my sig!
Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style
i liked the *Pow* part....................
very good poem you should just lengthen it a bit
Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style
All right, I know it's short. I'll come up with another poem soon.