It was short, but still a good poem, keep it up.
I hear the whistling in the air
Of the bomb that is floating there
Millions of lives will be lost today
Turn of events wouldn't you say?
The bomb I see is exploding now
All I can think to do now is *POW!!!*
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If anyone's wondering, that's me hitting someone I would never think to hit at any other time.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
It was short, but still a good poem, keep it up.
seeing your on death is origanle i like that
and it was short also just like a bomb short and sweet
i liek how you showed that
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
Isolate and save you from yourself
Ker-BOOOOOOOM!!!that and my sig!
NoT tHe SiGgY yOu R lOOkInG 4
Move Along.
i liked the *Pow* part....................
very good poem you should just lengthen it a bit
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All right, I know it's short. I'll come up with another poem soon.
A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!
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