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The closer I get
The farther I fall
The stronger I am
The weaker I become
The more intelligence I have
All the dumber is my downfall
The more love that I show
The less love I have for you
And although that may be true
I'm still in love with you
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Another little one. >.< Well, open to comments.
Its sweet I love it!!!! you should Join allpoetry.com if your not registered, you can put your poems on there, cause you have awsome poems and should share them with other people
nice poem i liked how you talk about
loving someone even if they dont love you as much very cool
peom its sort of short so i cant really say much about it but its
a really good poem
Well, for something I thought up in such a short time, it is pretty good isn't it? :p heh heh Well, at least someone noticed it.
sweet poem man, i like the way you wrote it.
I like the idea of the poem. I'd like to see more elaboration.
There are more poems to come. That's for sure. Just, I'm not one to draw things out. I'm a get to the point go getter, that's all. That's why mine are so short. Keep your eyes on this thread if you want to see more.
This is not the place to post your spam! This is a thread, where you comment on the poem that's written by shadowrulz.Quote:
Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23
Take those silly questions via a PM. Don't ever repeat this again! If you have nothing to say about the poem, then just don't post anything!