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    Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    The closer I get
    The farther I fall

    The stronger I am
    The weaker I become

    The more intelligence I have
    All the dumber is my downfall

    The more love that I show
    The less love I have for you

    And although that may be true
    I'm still in love with you

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    Another little one. >.< Well, open to comments.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    Its sweet I love it!!!! you should Join allpoetry.com if your not registered, you can put your poems on there, cause you have awsome poems and should share them with other people
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    Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    nice poem i liked how you talk about
    loving someone even if they dont love you as much very cool
    peom its sort of short so i cant really say much about it but its
    a really good poem
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and all your demons
    I'll be the one to protect you from a will to survive and a voice of reason
    I'll be the one to protect you from your enemies and your choices son
    They're one in the same, I must isolate you...
    Isolate and save you from yourself

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    Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    Well, for something I thought up in such a short time, it is pretty good isn't it? heh heh Well, at least someone noticed it.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    sweet poem man, i like the way you wrote it.

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    Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    I like the idea of the poem. I'd like to see more elaboration.
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    Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    There are more poems to come. That's for sure. Just, I'm not one to draw things out. I'm a get to the point go getter, that's all. That's why mine are so short. Keep your eyes on this thread if you want to see more.

    A big thanks to Renn for the sig! THANK YOU!

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    Re: Poetry corner; Shadow's style [2]

    Quote Originally Posted by TaurusDemon23
    How's world conquest going, Hedgehog?
    This is not the place to post your spam! This is a thread, where you comment on the poem that's written by shadowrulz.

    Take those silly questions via a PM. Don't ever repeat this again! If you have nothing to say about the poem, then just don't post anything!

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