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May 21, 2007, 05:51 AM
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 Diamond in the Rough  Join Date: Jun 2006 Location: In the Pearl of the Orient
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 Credits: 1,497 | The Point of no Return The Point of No Return Wandering in the midst of the desert, Salty water flows from the tired body, Unsure where this journey might lead, Worn-out feet keep on walking. Vision is tainted by the sun’s rays, Countless images infest the subtle mind, Illusions corrupt the entire essence, Insanity is within walking distance. The search for the oasis goes on, As hope fades slowly with time's hand The cursed soul is losing its grip, Forever lost is thus eternity. The beginning is lost The present is pointless The future is unknown. author's notes: This is the shortest poem i ever made ^^ Thanks for reading
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May 21, 2007, 07:39 AM
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Credits: 49,375 | Re: The Point of no Return This is the shortest poem you've made!!?? Oh my good I think it's longer than most of mine... I think this is quite a good poem the only line I didn't like was: Quote:
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May 21, 2007, 12:25 PM
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| ♡♥I love you Kyle Kun!♥♡  Join Date: Apr 2007 Location: In my lovers heart
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Credits: 13,226 | Re: The Point of no Return This sounds so cool!!!!! I like it for its mysteries for some reason!!!!! It some how seems like somethings hiding!!! It seems so cool!!! Hope to see more in the future!!!
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May 21, 2007, 01:30 PM
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May 22, 2007, 02:27 AM
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| King Of Darkness  Join Date: May 2006 Location: someplace where the only light is the moon above
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Credits: 3,320 | Re: The Point of no Return very awesome poem Raja and the way you described how life is so random was very cool because with out all the harshness of the things that come from going through the desert of life therw ould no point in trying to refocus your thoughts for a better goal. this really give you something to think about and i enjoyed it alot your poems are really impresive and i emjoyed this one alot |
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May 22, 2007, 04:40 AM
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Credits: 1,497 | Re: The Point of no Return Thanks Lasura, for reading and posting a comment on my poem ^^. I really do Appreciate it and thus, it made me inspire to do more. ^^ KuwiRules145, thanks for reading and i am happy that you liked the mystery of my poem. ^^ Thanks for the comment and your insights about my poem, bratling. ^^ HolderOfTheDarkChalice, thank you for reading my poem and posting your comments and insights. I am also glad that you liked it. ^^ A struggle of living...
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