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    ........Poison Lead........

    Jar is her weapon
    Open-mindedness to her is poison
    Hoping she can leave the dark
    Nothing allow her in light park

    Reaping one's soul is what she refers
    On what is wrong she suffers
    Lonely is disgusting
    Laughing is confusing
    You can take what she is crying

    Are some people understand her
    Can those people make her a shower
    Easy talking is her power

    Dark will reveal
    Anxious must be seal
    Violence as you read
    In her world has many dark bead
    Duty must her to lead
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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    Re: ........Poison Lead........

    This is a real gem for you. I think it is one of your best works, and I know you put a lot of time and effort into this. Good Job. Clearly it is about a women but is it about any perticular woman you know or just made up.

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    Re: ........Poison Lead........

    This is a real gem for you. I think it is one of your best works, and I know you put a lot of time and effort into this. Good Job. Clearly it is about a women but is it about any perticular woman you know or just made up.
    Yup,there's really a hint of it beast and few of my classmates knows about her(of course you just know it know^_^)

    I have my focus concentration and also my inspiration at the same time when I'm making this one!
    =))
    I loved her so much.... i would dare to risk my own life only to save her from dying....
    I loved my GF...
    http://i52.tinypic.com/zxa8pj.jpg[/IMG

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