Potential To Be Fantasized
I was so different
How did you expect me to regard
The way all this works?
Yes, I was meant for you
But how could you believe
That i was there for you
Even when i knew you knew
You kept playing love like it was just a game
Pretending to feel the same
But all you felt was pain
Until I recoginized
What you gave me was real
But out of every girl you knew
You picked me?
Now I found this very strange
Why would you like me anyway?
Maybe It's because
I was there every other day
I fixed these broken things
Repaired you're broken wings
Gave you everything
And made sure you were alright
I hugged you everytime
You felt the need to cry
And gave you all my love.
You chrished all of me
You gave me all of it
Got shot a thousand times
and knew I was there to help you
Survive.
I had no other choice
Cuz i knew that was the last time
You
said
Good bye.
You brouhgt so much attention
to every inch of me
Made me feel so special
Got me thinking there was a way
To free the angel trapped inside
I knew you needed love
To have the angel come
And show you everythings okay
Its okay
Whisper all thats right
Hold you in her arms, tight
Keep you safe from memories
That haunt
Your
Dreams.
Re: Potential To Be Fantasized
I liked this poem! I feel it flowed well, although I didn't like the ending much.. maybe you could mprove it a little?
This part:
I fixed these broken things
Repaired you're broken wings
Gave you everything
Was my favourite! It stuck out more and gave me a better picture like your helping an angel or somthing ^^
Very nice poem Star Girl! Please keep writing!