Well since you commented on my poem I'll return the favor. I'm not a huge fan of poems that don't rhyme, but this one is satisfying despite the abscense of rhyming verses.
I like how your poem is very fluid and creatively written. And I especially like the verse "like eyes drawn to universes we conjugate to banks and lotteries." That's a very good comparison you've got there. And the title (as the ending) "The poverty of riches" as it expresses how in becoming rich we are drawn into a mental state of emotional poverty.
Very nice poem in my opinion.