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Reply With QuoteI like this poem a lot because it speaks the truth and it was written well... Never forget those friends who have been with you all the way because someday they will need you too.. I like how you dedicated it to them...
The most powerfull thing known.
Of all the things that is known of power,
Friendship is the strongest.
Although some fail to see it,
I have come to know that is is.
With friends at hand they help you through.
Weather it is good times or bad times,
If your friends are thier they can help you recover.
All the time people seek solitude in sad times.
But knowing that frienship is good and powerfull,
the dark can never prevail.
Darkness may try but friends will win.
in all dark times friendship is the thing to seek.
Never hold in thoughts it is better to let them speek.
If friends are true they will listen and help.
If friends are true they will want you back to normal.
all times, good or bad, they will come through and prevail
To all my friends who have helped me through.
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
I like this poem a lot because it speaks the truth and it was written well... Never forget those friends who have been with you all the way because someday they will need you too.. I like how you dedicated it to them...
Thank you Jamie. I apreciate the feedback. And I dedicated it to them because they have recently helped me to over come the situation I was in verry quickly and I am very greatfull to have all of them. NO matter how new of a friend they are. Thank you so much for your feed back.
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
you did good like a lot
it say what true even blinded for little bit.
that friends will help each other out.
i enjoy it.and i hope you will write more soon
Thank you christalann. I promis I will right more. ok? anyways I am glad you guys like my poems.
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
Its not bad..a sweet poem...but aint love is the more powerful 1? Love binds friendships too ya know..thats a good view on friendship ^^ but u can do better...keep up the good work..
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thanks again rayme I am always looking for ways to improve my writing. thanks for the tips. (I am still a novice at this)lol
ナサン フォオツド
Keep what you hold dear close for one day they may be gone forever!
Make one person smile for it will continue to spread but if you make a frown that will spread as well.http://www.animeonline.net/gallery/s...0/ppuser/57173
pretty good poem! I didnt think it flowed as well as it could have but, still it has a very powerful messageso keep up the good work
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