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    Angelic Lasura may be famous one day Lasura's Avatar
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    Re: Prayer

    Quote Originally Posted by hellknight View Post
    @Lasura: it's all right, I had a hard time figuring out the second stanza, but I remember some movies that knew the lords will, so I put that on there, and it is kind a backwards isn't it?
    Could you explain what you mean with "bakwards" (sorry... )
    It's ok, now when you explained, the lack of inverted marks was the only thing that made me confused...

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    Re: Prayer

    Quote Originally Posted by Lasura View Post
    Could you explain what you mean with "bakwards" (sorry... )
    It's ok, now when you explained, the lack of inverted marks was the only thing that made me confused...
    Then I don't need to explain myself after you had finally understood it lol

    @angel: thanks and I guess you are right about that, I don't need to work on it anymore, and thank you for reading it.

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    Re: Prayer

    How nice. And a bit sad. But it was still amazing!!! hope to see more in the future!!!!
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    Re: Prayer

    Quote Originally Posted by KuwiRules145 View Post
    How nice. And a bit sad. But it was still amazing!!! hope to see more in the future!!!!
    I felt something there, but I didn't feel any sadness, is there really sadness in this poem?

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