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    preteen

    {i wrote this a while ago, though i still have it, hope u like it}


    In a world filled with
    changes each and every day
    i feel like i'm judged for what i do and say
    i remember back to barbies
    and play days in the park
    when i didn't worry about
    other people's remarks.
    But looking in the mirror
    i see to my surprise
    a completely different person staring deep into my eyes
    the carefree little child i
    saw at four and five
    has now become a preteen
    learning to survive


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    i feel like i'm judged for what i do and say
    has now become a preteen
    learning to survive
    Simple but it has a deep meaning set into it. Ohhh... the judgemental years of adolescence. O.o
    I would have liked to have seen the onset of maturity represented a little better. But its great. ^_^

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    @reese-thankies. i made this poem when i turned 10, since then i didn't change it or anything.


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    Very cute simple yet deep poem. Nice work. I'd give you some advice right now but i cant remember what i was going to say. -.- its too late at night for me to be thinking. Keep up the good work miss cutie. ^^

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    thanks 4 heads up? lol. well, again made this at age 10.


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    Man I hate when that happens, but it does. I like how it says you have to open up to reality, or reality is thrown in your face. (T__T) I remember those days, and this poem makes since, and makes you think in your own way.
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    growing up is all part of live, lil sis~ ^^
    baa~
    i salute you for realizing this and even turning it into a poem at such a young age~
    sheep recalls when sheep was 10years old:
    sheep was cursing f*** to maths/class teacher, bullying the boys....
    *sweat drop* with Miratsuki..... we started our friendship there!
    right mira? ^^ baka mira is not here! XD

    anyway, nice poem pie-chan~
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    @Mr. K-i relate 2 a lot of people, making my poems can relate or just goof of and doesn't make sence.

    @Aya-kun-lol, bulling the boys...lol. smooth.


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