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    Re: preteen

    Once again RCP lays down another stunning poem! Great job, this line I thought was the "highlight" of the poem witch realy brought it together,

    i see to my surprise
    a completely different person staring deep into my eyes
    Keep Up the good work!

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    thanks the fighter. ^_^


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    I lyk your poem! I think it's great, you sure look interesting to me^^

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    Re: preteen

    i really love the ending "the carefree little child i
    saw at four and five
    has now become a preteen
    learning to survive" is just a perfect little warp up for this poem you brewed up.
    I can really relate to this poem!
    I totally think you made it sound like a real preteen speaking out on her true feelings.
    This poem reminds me of the "chicken soup for the preteen soul" book i have read.
    wonderful work RCP.
    I hope this poem gives a bit of motivation for preteens out there who need advice on surviving preteen years lol

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    thankies all. ^_^


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    Amazing,, short words expres a lot and ur poems are the proove

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    @Hitokiri Battousai-lol, i just don't like writing a lot*sweat*


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