Princess

heres a really short poem i just thought of hope you all like it:

Your lips are sweet as strawberries
Your eyes are blue like lilacs in the morning dew
Your hair as shiny as the sun in may
I dream of you all the time
My princess in the tower

Oh wow how romantic I love it good job! It's so nice and just romantic! Really hope to see more!^^

Oh... how cute... just what i needed this evening to make me smile ^^ so nice... so knight-like!!!!!! ^^ very sweet....

I really like it... nice work indeed and as long as needed... praising a girl more could start to seem banal and show you kind of not knighty at all... very nice ^^ write more

Awwww..... this poem is just so adorable really!!!!! I think it's just too romantic really!!!!!!!!!!! I hope to see more of your work ok! :D:

Altho short very romantic.Good job.Keep writing.........Or else.

thank you guys, i know its short but it came from the top of my head and i decided to post, any way thanks, appreciate all the compliments

Yeah, I agree. It was very romantic without overdoing it.

I can definetly understand how sometimes lines just come out of the top of your head, without even thinking.

Nice Work

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Originally Posted by ILikeApples5520

Yeah, I agree. It was very romantic without overdoing it.

I can definetly understand how sometimes lines just come out of the top of your head, without even thinking.

Nice Work

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well you see i mostly do dark poems so i thought id try something a little different this time and like i said they came of the top of my haed and i wrote them down it was that simple