I've made you a priority,
You've only made a fool of me.
Something for which I yearn.
As if I'd get another turn.
Just ashes, since you watched me burn.
I'm not even option C.
Yet you've been number one to me.
I'd go running to your beckon.
I wouldn't waste a second.
Still my intention's questioned...
Learned my lesson.
No balance will ever be...
And still I feed a this dying tree.
In burns inside, to face it.
I've tried to be complacent.
Love, so thick I can taste it.
Who'll repalce it?
Is it wasted?
Learned lessons provide much wealth.
Making my number one, .....myself.
Wow, I really like this one peach! Its really, its like you put every ounce of your emotion into it ^.^ I think that its a tiny-bit long, but other than that, its perfect. Great work on your part.
I am on Sol's side. I really like this and can see a lot of emotion in it.
I don't think it's long I've seen some long poems from ya'. Haha.
But yes. Very well written and great emotion.
I really really dig this one.
Long? You think -THIS- is long? :laugh:
Originally Posted by Sol-x
Aw, thats cute.... But thank you both for the compliments and the time it took to read this (unbarebly long LOL) piece.
LOL. I only said tiny, not I said is was as long as an essay XD. But I still loved it regardless. It was a little unbearable(im lieing through my teeth right now XP), but I still thought it rocked (not lieing now XP)
Originally Posted by Peach_follows