I reallly love this poem. Especially the repetition of this part: "What’s your problem
With me today"
Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to read more of your poems. ^^
Problem Today
Leave me alone
Go away
What’s your problem
With me today
It’s always the same people
I can never please
So what’s your problem
With me today
Yesterday it was what I said
Day before, the way I was
So what’s your problem
With me today
Will I ever be good enough
What haven’t I done right
What’s your problem
With me today
Well screw it
I don’t care
Take your problems
And throw them up in the air
For I give up
I’m done
Leave me alone
For I don’t care anymore…
I reallly love this poem. Especially the repetition of this part: "What’s your problem
With me today"
Keep up the great work and I'll be looking forward to read more of your poems. ^^
Dang...........somebody sure pissed you off!!!!!!!!!!!
But I love the poem.......great job!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
yeah... my parents... -.-
Thanks Tifa. ^-^ First time i ever did something like that I think.
Thank you very much. ^-^ I'm glad you loved it Astaroth
Sure thing........I know how parents are......thanks goodness i moved away!!!!!!!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME UNLEASH MY INNER DEMON
Hmm... :/ sheesh... nicely done... well if my parents are busybody i understand because they care...but ur parents from what you said.. im not sure at all... :/
keep it up ^^
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Wow Angellic hum I am glad I wasnt the one to piss you off! lol sorry about your issues though, I know see, hum whatever I can do to chear up a friend I will do it! just let me know if you wanna talk. anyways good poem I like it!
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ouch! That one is reall agressive! oh well! I still liked it! Well keep up the work! can't wait for more!
I tryed to see things from your point of view but i cant seem to get my head that far up my ass!
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