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Nothing...
then a seedling....
Shade I am.
Shade I seem to one day become.
Sprouting...
now growing...
but blackness not be what I am...
so what am I?
I break the ground...
sunlight there above me...
and I reach for the sky to get,
to the very light I percieve.
Kind Hearted I am...
not cold anymore...
till the cold returns one day,
to try to break me of growth.
I sprout...
and soon I find myself,
in the loving care of friends,
that i thought I'd never have.
I grow to a flower...
not knowing that i'd be one,
I take this name,
for that is what i have become.
White Rose...
that is my identity now.
Has been for a while,
and with such purity.
My heart stands firm,
though a delicate flower I am.
Do not doubt my place here...
I've grown for a reason.
My place is in this garden...
in this Earth.
And for once,
I look around.
I see next to me that be,
a flower just like me.
Red be the color of this flower though,
and now are our roots tangled so.
This is my life,
and bits of my story.
I am who I am and will forever be...
Me.
Justin McCormick, White Rose
Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.
Wow, I really liked it. The way you used symbolism throughout the poem was really cool. It all connected well. Great job!![]()
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A white rose no longer alone
I know who's heart it is to represent
I didn't pick it, but i let it grow
For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums
Wow! beauitful! What emotion!
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