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![]() ![]() Credits: 3,439 | Progression Nothing... then a seedling.... Shade I am. Shade I seem to one day become. Sprouting... now growing... but blackness not be what I am... so what am I? I break the ground... sunlight there above me... and I reach for the sky to get, to the very light I percieve. Kind Hearted I am... not cold anymore... till the cold returns one day, to try to break me of growth. I sprout... and soon I find myself, in the loving care of friends, that i thought I'd never have. I grow to a flower... not knowing that i'd be one, I take this name, for that is what i have become. White Rose... that is my identity now. Has been for a while, and with such purity. My heart stands firm, though a delicate flower I am. Do not doubt my place here... I've grown for a reason. My place is in this garden... in this Earth. And for once, I look around. I see next to me that be, a flower just like me. Red be the color of this flower though, and now are our roots tangled so. This is my life, and bits of my story. I am who I am and will forever be... Me. Justin McCormick, White Rose
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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Mar 2006 Location: Justin's heart
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![]() ![]() Credits: 364 | Re: Progression Wow, I really liked it. The way you used symbolism throughout the poem was really cool. It all connected well. Great job!
__________________ A white rose no longer alone I know who's heart it is to represent I didn't pick it, but i let it grow For he's the one that's heaven sent. : I love you, my White Rose.: The Poop Forums |
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Diamond in the Rough Join Date: Apr 2006 Location: In a banana
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![]() Credits: 4,261 | Re: Progression Wow! beauitful! What emotion!
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