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    Progression

    Nothing...
    then a seedling....
    Shade I am.
    Shade I seem to one day become.

    Sprouting...
    now growing...
    but blackness not be what I am...
    so what am I?

    I break the ground...
    sunlight there above me...
    and I reach for the sky to get,
    to the very light I percieve.

    Kind Hearted I am...
    not cold anymore...
    till the cold returns one day,
    to try to break me of growth.

    I sprout...
    and soon I find myself,
    in the loving care of friends,
    that i thought I'd never have.

    I grow to a flower...
    not knowing that i'd be one,
    I take this name,
    for that is what i have become.

    White Rose...
    that is my identity now.
    Has been for a while,
    and with such purity.

    My heart stands firm,
    though a delicate flower I am.
    Do not doubt my place here...
    I've grown for a reason.

    My place is in this garden...
    in this Earth.
    And for once,
    I look around.

    I see next to me that be,
    a flower just like me.
    Red be the color of this flower though,
    and now are our roots tangled so.

    This is my life,
    and bits of my story.
    I am who I am and will forever be...
    Me.


    Justin McCormick, White Rose

    Far be it for me to be anything special, when the only special thing I desire with me, is the special person I share my gifts with.

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    Re: Progression

    Wow, I really liked it. The way you used symbolism throughout the poem was really cool. It all connected well. Great job!
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    Re: Progression

    yep this is a great poem. Symbolism fits well with it. Keep it up ^ ^


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    Re: Progression

    Wow! beauitful! What emotion!
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