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    Lucky lucky lucky me. I really like the way you wrote this, it reminds me of something I wrote recently too. But mine was a different message I think. I'm a lot more negetive then you. ;p But at any rate. This poems message was beautiful and well conveyed through your use of words and the flow you attached to this one.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Quote Originally Posted by bratling View Post
    Lucky lucky lucky me. I really like the way you wrote this, it reminds me of something I wrote recently too. But mine was a different message I think. I'm a lot more negetive then you. ;p But at any rate. This poems message was beautiful and well conveyed through your use of words and the flow you attached to this one.
    Thanks again, Chan! ^_^

    It makes me happy to know that you like my writing more than I like it, LOL!


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    Yeah well. Your a little anal retentive sometimes. Especially when it comes to the things you do a lot. Such as drawing. Don't deny it. You know it's true.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    Thanks again, Chan! ^_^

    It makes me happy to know that you like my writing more than I like it, LOL!
    well hum I wonder what that means!!! anyways sprout good job on this one it was well written and verry powerfull keep it up man anyways thee is one thing I can tell you to hopefully help you through this delema and I have told my girl many times, love and hate dont mix, so if who you write about truly loves you there is not doubt in my mind she could NEVER hate you. and I agree with highteckdudu you are a great person and a wonderfull friend and I hope the best for both of you. you have my support. anyways back to the poem, I really liked it and it made me remember the things I have thought about in this relationship I have had, when you write your poems you tell me a story and I enjoy reading it over and over. keep it up and I will shut up now I am rambling. lol anyways good job and keep posting.
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    well hum I wonder what that means!!! anyways sprout good job on this one it was well written and verry powerfull keep it up man anyways thee is one thing I can tell you to hopefully help you through this delema and I have told my girl many times, love and hate dont mix, so if who you write about truly loves you there is not doubt in my mind she could NEVER hate you. and I agree with highteckdudu you are a great person and a wonderfull friend and I hope the best for both of you. you have my support. anyways back to the poem, I really liked it and it made me remember the things I have thought about in this relationship I have had, when you write your poems you tell me a story and I enjoy reading it over and over. keep it up and I will shut up now I am rambling. lol anyways good job and keep posting.
    Hey, thanks so much, Ichigo_06, for your encouraging words! ^_^
    As always, I appreciate your taking the time to read my work! Also, thank you for your input on relationships and such. You're a good friend!


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    your verry welcome sprout anytime you need to talk you know where you can find me. lol here! anyways your welcome again and I will be there if you need it. keep posting!
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    Quote Originally Posted by Ichigo_06 View Post
    well hum I wonder what that means!!! anyways sprout good job on this one it was well written and verry powerfull keep it up man anyways thee is one thing I can tell you to hopefully help you through this delema and I have told my girl many times, love and hate dont mix, so if who you write about truly loves you there is not doubt in my mind she could NEVER hate you. and I agree with highteckdudu you are a great person and a wonderfull friend and I hope the best for both of you. you have my support. anyways back to the poem, I really liked it and it made me remember the things I have thought about in this relationship I have had, when you write your poems you tell me a story and I enjoy reading it over and over. keep it up and I will shut up now I am rambling. lol anyways good job and keep posting.
    She may say she hates you though. Which isn't the same thing. People say a lot of things in anger and thats a popular one. Especially with me when I'm trying to ruine things to run away.

    You never really loved me/You never really cared/It was all just a game to boost your ego/Those feelings never really there/ I'm filing emotional bankruptcy/My heart can take no more debt/Theres no more "money" there to spend. === Besides tee hee SHE loves me!

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    this is just takin me its runing bak the sadness of the lies people have told me i love this poem i really fill it please i cant wait to see more of your work
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