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    Prognastication

    Now that I think about it, if you've ever seen the anime X or the movie X:1999 you will understand the poem better. I'm here for criticism.


    Shaped in the design of darkness,
    Humanity is given a destiny.
    A prophecy bestowed upon souls,
    That heralds the demise of love.

    Locked in the futile war of fate,
    Mortality sings a song.
    The lyrics speak of wisdom and charity,
    A life never to be fulfilled.

    The tuneless cry of hope
    echoes through the walls of time.
    The structure of humanity,
    designed of corruption.
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    Re: Pronastication

    It's good ^_^ better watch the movie!

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    Re: Pronastication

    Why are they always so short! But I've seen X, and I think it goes great with the movie. I like it.
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    Re: Pronastication

    wow i like the poem, no i want to see the movie

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    Re: Pronastication

    Not bad, not bad at all. I think I should go watch that now.
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    Re: Pronastication

    wow what a nice short poem, it was great good job keep it up.

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    Re: Pronastication

    Hmm, very nice poem...... and I think it doesnt just relate to the anime X (except probably for the first paragraph) Its more on the current world we live in.......

    It was very descriptive..... I find very little more could be added to improve it. So, awesome job
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    Re: Pronastication

    Quote Originally Posted by bassdudez
    Hmm, very nice poem...... and I think it doesnt just relate to the anime X (except probably for the first paragraph) Its more on the current world we live in.......

    It was very descriptive..... I find very little more could be added to improve it. So, awesome job
    Thank you very much for the criticism.
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