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Reply With QuoteAwwwwww. This is one of my fav poems here on AO. Your choie of words, subject is wonderful. It put a smile on my face by reading.
If I was more to you
Than a shade of blue,
Cascading mountains of red.
Then, I wouldn't fade away,
In hues of gray.
Hanging, like loose thread.
So long, so loose,
A deep chartreuce.
Outlining a violet mass.
Its only me,
In this lilac sea.
Waiting for time to pass.
I've been in this daze,
Like purple haze.
With a methodic golden glare.
Anticipated twilight.
Moonlit, silver, white.
Just wishing you were there.
... Not Ever Again...
Awwwwww. This is one of my fav poems here on AO. Your choie of words, subject is wonderful. It put a smile on my face by reading.
Seduced by Flesh
This is a good poem, very simplistic yet there is something deeper in the meaning! Keep up the good work and I look for to reading more of you work here on AO!
Awww I love it. It's really good. I really like the word choice. And like Blue Fox said theres a deeper meaning to it that makes it even better. Cn't wait to see more of your work.(^.^)
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