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    Purple.

    If I was more to you
    Than a shade of blue,
    Cascading mountains of red.

    Then, I wouldn't fade away,
    In hues of gray.
    Hanging, like loose thread.

    So long, so loose,
    A deep chartreuce.
    Outlining a violet mass.

    Its only me,
    In this lilac sea.
    Waiting for time to pass.

    I've been in this daze,
    Like purple haze.
    With a methodic golden glare.

    Anticipated twilight.
    Moonlit, silver, white.
    Just wishing you were there.
    ... Not Ever Again...

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    Re: Purple.

    Awwwwww. This is one of my fav poems here on AO. Your choie of words, subject is wonderful. It put a smile on my face by reading.
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    Re: Purple.

    This is a good poem, very simplistic yet there is something deeper in the meaning! Keep up the good work and I look for to reading more of you work here on AO!

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    Re: Purple.

    Awww I love it. It's really good. I really like the word choice. And like Blue Fox said theres a deeper meaning to it that makes it even better. Cn't wait to see more of your work.(^.^)

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