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An acrostic poem that I made for someone.. Please comment.

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Crazy in love that I may be
A lonely heart is what you'll see
Not a word that I can write
Yearning for my only light

One by one I made each line
Unaware of its design
Blended words coming from a scratch
Even though they never match

Must I finish writing this
Yawning with every moonlight's kiss
Only then it would fullfill
Not just part but my whole will

Empty thought as it may seem
A simple message is what it brings
No word can express my love for you
Dreaming that you'll feel the same way too

Out of rhyme might be this poem of mine
Never noticed it showed a sign
Longing to confess on my heart's desire
Yet I just can't say it to you whom I admire

Going through to what I have written
I never thought that this would happen
Read the first letters in every line and
Let your heart give me a sign

A great poem!!!! ^^ Nicely written, I like the fact how you write what you think of this poem too... it's very cool!!! Won't even talk about how strong your feelings seem in this poem... That girl who got this poem is really, really lucky... Didn't think there are many guys like you who still write poems to their loved ones like in the ages of knights... very nice to see it's not true...

A great work indeed... and I'll be really looking forward for something more... I'm always glad to see someone new (you're new for me) hanging around the Poem section...

I think the rhyme scheme is adorible asis the sentiment behind this. Cleverly written! I liked it a lot.

Thanks for your comments guys. I appreciate it a lot.

I'll be posting some of my poems if I have time.