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    An acrostic poem that I made for someone.. Please comment.

    Question Mark

    Crazy in love that I may be
    A lonely heart is what you'll see
    Not a word that I can write
    Yearning for my only light

    One by one I made each line
    Unaware of its design
    Blended words coming from a scratch
    Even though they never match

    Must I finish writing this
    Yawning with every moonlight's kiss
    Only then it would fullfill
    Not just part but my whole will

    Empty thought as it may seem
    A simple message is what it brings
    No word can express my love for you
    Dreaming that you'll feel the same way too

    Out of rhyme might be this poem of mine
    Never noticed it showed a sign
    Longing to confess on my heart's desire
    Yet I just can't say it to you whom I admire

    Going through to what I have written
    I never thought that this would happen
    Read the first letters in every line and
    Let your heart give me a sign

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    Re: Question Mark

    A great poem!!!! ^^ Nicely written, I like the fact how you write what you think of this poem too... it's very cool!!! Won't even talk about how strong your feelings seem in this poem... That girl who got this poem is really, really lucky... Didn't think there are many guys like you who still write poems to their loved ones like in the ages of knights... very nice to see it's not true...

    A great work indeed... and I'll be really looking forward for something more... I'm always glad to see someone new (you're new for me) hanging around the Poem section...

    My recommended fanfic: "Dreamer" by Scourge

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    Re: Question Mark

    I think the rhyme scheme is adorible asis the sentiment behind this. Cleverly written! I liked it a lot.

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    Re: Question Mark

    Thanks for your comments guys. I appreciate it a lot.

    I'll be posting some of my poems if I have time.

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